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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good
members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn
this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how well older people educate children to
become valuable citizens. While some argue that it would be better for children to
be disciplined by their parents, I believe that children should be educated how to
become respectable/decent citizens at school.
There are various reasons why people believe that parents should teach their
children to adopt/develop/build up good manners. Firstly, children are prone to
listen to their parents who are powerful in families. For example, children might
worry about wrong actions, which leads to their making a decision as to whether
they should commit/display such behaviour pattern if they have ever been
punished by their parents before. Secondly, children have a close relationship
with their parents whom they always count on whenever they meet toughs in their
life. Children, therefore, may pour their concern easily into parent’s heart so
parents are able to give advice timely, which is one of the most important factors
to deter children from becoming perverse. Finally, not only do parents bring their
children rights verbally, but also their life behaviors can have profound influences
on their children because children tend to imitate actions of older people.
In spite of these arguments, I hold the perception that/I am inclined to argue that
schooling would play an essential role in the formation of children’s characters.
Except for homes, school is the place children spend the biggest amount of time.
Thus, teachers are likely to be second parents to instruct children in being aware
of the rights and the wrongs in every walk of life. Admittedly, teachers can be
stricter with children than parents given that parents usually spoil their children
excessively. Under this circumstance, educating in school is the best solution to
build a good personality of children. Moreover, school environment will enable
children to either find out their abilities or their desires by attending some
recreational physical activities or studying specific subjects; this is beneficial to
children in becoming well-rounded individuals in the future.
In conclusion, apart from being primarily responsible for educating children from
parents, schools also prevent children from the misguided frame of mind to be
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