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International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that
this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions on this?
In line with the shift in time, a recent phenomenon on the tourism of citizens
indicates some concerns in terms of problems from international tourists. This
essay will elaborate on some probable causes and positive solutions which can
improve this situation.
There are some widespread reasons why local people consider that tourists who
are from other countries would have some negative impacts on their societies.
Firstly, the consciousness of tourists about saving the environment of the country
where they visit is seen as the main reason, for example, some foreign tourists
often draw their marks on the wall in historical places like temple or museum as
well as litter beautiful landscapes such as famous beaches. Secondly, nowadays
some tourists take advantages from visiting another country to stay illegally. For
instance, there are a large number of people from developing countries travel to
South Korean nowadays, and their purpose is to reside without being accepted
immigration, so it would be complicated for the government of the country to
manipulate illegal immigrants.
Therefore/Subsequently/Inevitably, some measures should be implemented to deal
with these issues of international tourism. It is necessary for the host countries to
be strict to tourism agencies about ensuring that they would not let their customers
commit any unfit behavior which is mentioned above by giving some strict rules.
For example, the financial and prison punishments for tourists who lack
awareness should be implemented. Another remedy is that local people especially
youngsters can participate in some volunteer activities to introduce the beauty of
their culture and landscape to tourists so the visitors have more respect for the
country they visit.
In conclusion, by conducting some positive solutions to resolve common negative
belief of local people, this situation would be better.
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