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The essay is well-written and argued. It fully answers both parts of the
question, with plenty of relevant support. It’s also logically organised, and
so easy to read and understand. 
The good use of lexis (vocabulary) shows that this person has an excellent
grasp of English. With your lexis, it’s important to get the word forms
correct. These examples show how the writer is good at doing this:
detrimental
motivate
embarrassment
encouragement
Collocations are also important to end up with correct sentences. If a word
collocates with another word, that means it commonly goes together with it.
For instance, a word may go with a certain preposition (depending on the
context). For example:
influence of
dabble in
in difficult times
copy from
involved in
If a writer knows which words commonly collocate then they are able to
write ccurate sentences.

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Life in the Future Essay
This essay is about life in the future and whether you think it will become
better or worse for most people. 
This is the question;
Some people feel that, within the next hundred years, life will become
better for the majority of people. Others are less sure. 
What is your opinion about this? 
Understanding the Task 
This kind of task (‘what is your opinion’) is much more open than some
other opinion essay types.
For example, when you are asked to ‘discuss both opinions and give your
own opinion’ you must discuss both sides of the arguments. However, in
this case, you could choose to look at both sides of the issue as with
‘discuss two opinions’ type essays: 
Why life could be better
Why life could be worse
Your opinion 
But alternatively you could decide that life will definitely become better (or
worse) and focus your essay on that. So it’s a bit more similar
to ‘agree/disagree’ type essays, where you can look at both sides if you
wish or just focus on the side you agree (or disagree) with.
Basically, the essay is asking what your opinion on the issue is, so it’s
perfectly acceptable to decide what your opinion is (for or against) and
write about that. 
In this sample answer, the focus in on why life will become better. 

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